Thesis:Sometimes even if we have to eat out, we should prefer to eat at home.
Reason: Places which we go to eat, is not enough hygiene.
Opponants:There are a lot of place is hygine and cook very healty
Result: We aren't sure everytime places we go to.
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You should mention your reasons in your thesis statement. You preferred eating at home but you didn't mention why you preferred this. Moreover, your supporting sentence is too weak. Could you please make it stronger and add more supporting sentences?
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